Make me a star
And I’ll give you want you want
On the screen
On stage
In the recording studio
In print
Make me a star
And I’ll show you what I’m made of
Part ambition
Part talent
Part scandal
Part alcohol
Make me a star
And I’ll let it all hang out
My beauty
My charm
My flaws
My criminal record
Make me a star
And I’ll live in infamy
I’ll break records
I’ll set standards
I’ll end relationships
I’ll break hearts and laws
Make me a star
And I’ll change everything about me
Change my name
Change my appearance
Change my style
Change my personality
Make me a star
And I’ll die inside
Rest in peace originality
Rest in peace creativity
Rest in peace ambition
Rest in peace me
Make me a star please. Make me a star.
©2008-2009 ~dutchgirlie07
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I've been watching all this horrible "entertainment television" and it made me realize a few things.
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Nice structure. I like how with the example stanzas they get progressively worse as you go through the poem, until there is nothing good listed about being a star at all. Very well done. Nice repetition, too.
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I like how everything ended anyways.. XD
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But thank you anyway.
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Use more complicated, intricate words and once you get good at what you are doing, make your lines longer and more filled with emotion
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